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When a terrifying drug lord requires surgery after an assassination attempt, an infiltration specialist must terminate him, posing as a surgeon inside his fortified mansion, before he brings Venezuela into civil war.
Since It's after a failed assassination of the SA's biggest drug lord, I doubt if his followers would be that careless at background checking, even a renowned surgeon.Anyhow, It's unclear when the infiltration is happening, at what stage of the film? it's hard to imagine the span of action of the maRead more
Since It’s after a failed assassination of the SA’s biggest drug lord, I doubt if his followers would be that careless at background checking, even a renowned surgeon.
Anyhow, It’s unclear when the infiltration is happening, at what stage of the film? it’s hard to imagine the span of action of the main character – even murder without a compelling reason – how long does it take to kill someone? in other words, the logline doesn’t help us with what’s happening in the second act.
I like the premise, his goal is singular but it needs to justify why we want him to win. Good Luck.
See lessWhen a naive girl is captured by a group of people smugglers, she will create a plan to escape from the hell in which she is
1.A naive girl planning to escape is a little monotonous. Urgency is good, she 'must escape..' rather than 'planning to'2.Getting captured is not the most impressive inciting incident.Suggestion: She could be someone lured by false promise of a lucrative job or education scholarship.
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A naive girl planning to escape is a little monotonous. Urgency is good, she ‘must escape..’ rather than ‘planning to’
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Getting captured is not the most impressive inciting incident.
Suggestion: She could be someone lured by false promise of a lucrative job or education scholarship.
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If they are forever bound by a magical origami legend, what's the conflict?
If they are forever bound by a magical origami legend, what’s the conflict?
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