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In an anthropomorphic animal world, a Wild Macaque from a Primitive tribe tries to fit into an 18th century aristocratic society in order to rescue her father from a Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit.
What makes it a comedy? You can drop "In an anthropomorphic world.." Can be made more urgent than "tries to fit into.." for she must, if she is to save her father. It's an interesting logline. Have you thought of an inciting incident? Like after realizing her father's still alive.. Good luck with yoRead more
What makes it a comedy?
You can drop “In an anthropomorphic world..”
Can be made more urgent than “tries to fit into..” for she must, if she is to save her father.
It’s an interesting logline. Have you thought of an inciting incident? Like after realizing her father’s still alive..
Good luck with your logline.
See lessWhen their creator suddenly passes away, two sentient cyborgs must go against their programming and try to find a family for their creator’s son.
"..must go against their programming.." makes me want to know what were they programmed to begin with. It will help us visualize the span of their action.I like the premise. Which of two is leading the action?What happens if they do not find a family for him?
“..must go against their programming..” makes me want to know what were they programmed to begin with. It will help us visualize the span of their action.
See lessI like the premise. Which of two is leading the action?
What happens if they do not find a family for him?
After getting injected with a rage serum, the injected man must use his new found abilities to stop a rich vengeful businessman from flooding the streets with his serum to destroy the city.
How is it that after 'getting injected' he MUST 'save the city'? How's the Inciting Incident propelling him towards the Goal?
How is it that after ‘getting injected’ he MUST ‘save the city’? How’s the Inciting Incident propelling him towards the Goal?
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