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Upon realising he has a super-fan, the emotionally volatile singer of a struggling band initially feels flattered; but he allows this feeling to darken into something obsessive and unhealthy as he and the fan begin an illicit dance of mutual shadowing, pursuing each other without ever actually meeting. So when the fan’s interest begins to wane, her happiness and the wellbeing of those around her is threatened by his unwillingness to give up her adoration.
Who's your lead? I'm guessing it's the fan; shouldn't have to guess. Like where the story is headed. Clarity is required.I find the Rules section to be interesting and relevant. Hope it helps.Looking forward for your revision. Good luck.
Who’s your lead? I’m guessing it’s the fan; shouldn’t have to guess. Like where the story is headed. Clarity is required.
I find the Rules section to be interesting and relevant. Hope it helps.
Looking forward for your revision. Good luck.
See lessWhen a struggling video game designer begins seeing his characters in real life, he suspects he?s already playing a game of his own creation and begins searching for patterns to help complete and escape the game.
"After suspecting reality to be a part of his virtual creation, a game designer must..."? This is where I'm confused, how will virtual replication of his life be a means to uncover a way out?The premise and stakes are most exciting but the line of action is virtual replication of his life, where's tRead more
“After suspecting reality to be a part of his virtual creation, a game designer must…”? This is where I’m confused, how will virtual replication of his life be a means to uncover a way out?
The premise and stakes are most exciting but the line of action is virtual replication of his life, where’s the conflict? What’s stopping him from pursuing his goal? How would it look on screen?
Good Luck.
See lessWhen a former commando steals secret government documents, he races to prevent a warmongering dictator from obtaining powerful alien technology to start an interplanetary war.
Is stealing a document enough to incite a former commando to prevent an interplanetary alien war? Why him? How are the stakes unique to him? I like the antagonist (which you justify - more so - than the protagonist)
Is stealing a document enough to incite a former commando to prevent an interplanetary alien war? Why him? How are the stakes unique to him?
See lessI like the antagonist (which you justify – more so – than the protagonist)