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When his reflection changes to a young woman who needs his help, a reclusive author must enter Miraland and lead the rebellion against the crooked regime before the corruption spills into the real world.
sounds awesome as a premise . . Why him? What are the stakes if he doesn't? Maybe connect his being a 'reclusive author' to how only he can help, and thus must. Maybe Miraland is part of the fiction he's currently writing...... inspired by his recurring dream..... so he 'literally' wrote the physicsRead more
sounds awesome as a premise
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Why him? What are the stakes if he doesn’t?
Maybe connect his being a ‘reclusive author’ to how only he can help, and thus must. Maybe Miraland is part of the fiction he’s currently writing…… inspired by his recurring dream….. so he ‘literally’ wrote the physics that govern this world….
Good Luck mikepedley85
A detective being investigated on historic corruption charges becomes an ideal candidate for an off-the books assignment to locate missing evidence.
As Nettle said, What happens next? This off-the book assignment to locate missing evidence...... tell us more about it...... in such a way that his Goal becomes visible Good Luck theplaneteers
As Nettle said, What happens next?
See lessThis off-the book assignment to locate missing evidence…… tell us more about it…… in such a way that his Goal becomes visible
Good Luck theplaneteers
LOGLINE FOR A ‘PSYCH-THRILLER’ In order to restore virtue following a discriminatory arrest, a gutsy but ill-fated escort-worker must withstand and negotiate her way through, the next 24 hours locked-down alongside a parasitic anti-social, who evidently knows more about her than she should.
"After an unjust arrest, an escort-worker must negotiate her way--locked alongside a psychopath--who evidently knows more about her than herself" What's she falsely accused of? (to establish stakes) Still, that couldn't be her only way out, logically speaking. I'm also unsure how his 'knowing more aRead more
“After an unjust arrest, an escort-worker must negotiate her way–locked alongside a psychopath–who evidently knows more about her than herself”
What’s she falsely accused of? (to establish stakes)
See lessStill, that couldn’t be her only way out, logically speaking. I’m also unsure how his ‘knowing more about her’ poses a certain conflict. The verb here is negotiation. How cinematic is that (for 120 minutes)? Depends entirely on your writing skills.
Good Luck A_R_Road!