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  1. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Romance

    RE// When an impromptu business trip to Tokyo threatens his last chance with his dream girl, a resourceful romantic must find a way to go ahead with the date from 6000 miles away or risk losing her forever.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2018 at 8:14 pm

    My query remains the same -- How is it "his last chance"? How does he risk losing her forever? Apart from which it's something I've never seen before and would definitely watch. What are your thoughts? Good Luck :)

    My query remains the same — How is it “his last chance”? How does he risk losing her forever?
    Apart from which it’s something I’ve never seen before and would definitely watch.
    What are your thoughts?
    Good Luck 🙂

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Romance

    A man is informed he has one year to decides to do everything on his wife?s bucket list to maximise their time together, but she is to sad to enjoy the experience .

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2018 at 5:27 pm

    It's an Inspiring idea For logline format (not that it matters..) "After realizing he has one year to fulfill his wife?s bucket list, a retired accountant struggles to stretch their time together as she is too sad to enjoy the experience" Good Luck :)

    It’s an Inspiring idea
    For logline format (not that it matters..)
    “After realizing he has one year to fulfill his wife?s bucket list, a retired accountant struggles to stretch their time together as she is too sad to enjoy the experience”
    Good Luck 🙂

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2018In: SciFi

    In the distant future: When a naive teen joins the army, his over-protective biker brother must enlist, go through the harsh training, and find the boy so that he can get him out before they’re sent to battle against nightmarish aliens.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2018 at 12:34 pm

    sounds great to me. comes down to 30W with this slight edit -- "In distant future: When his naive teen brother joins the army, an over-protective motorist must enlist harsh training to get him out before they're sent to battle nightmarish aliens" Good Luck!!

    sounds great to me.
    comes down to 30W with this slight edit —
    “In distant future: When his naive teen brother joins the army, an over-protective motorist must enlist harsh training to get him out before they’re sent to battle nightmarish aliens”
    Good Luck!!

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