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Is it for a short film? Because it might not sustain a feature length plot..
Is it for a short film? Because it might not sustain a feature length plot..
See lessWhen a British Agent is accused of aiding the terrorist attack she failed to foil, she is forced to go on the run from, and on the hunt for, both friends and foes.
"being accused" should take place later (around the midpoint) to raise stakes. Instead your logline would benefit from "failing to prevent detonation" as an inciting incident Also, "to run away from friends and foes" is an action for the Goal "to prove his innocence" Another version could be -- ???Read more
“being accused” should take place later (around the midpoint) to raise stakes. Instead your logline would benefit from “failing to prevent detonation” as an inciting incident
Also, “to run away from friends and foes” is an action for the Goal “to prove his innocence”
Another version could be —
??? When a counterterrorist fails to prevent a detonation, he must prove his innocence while evading both his friends and foes ???
The premise is interesting and would benefit from a peculiar detail, which would seperate it from similar films….like “the fugitive” (1993) which has the same gameplay verb for protagonist
Good Luck Daryl Rogerson
See lessThe personal, political and (un)professional life of Julie, a plucky twenty-something, determined to buy her own house.
What stands in her way?
What stands in her way?
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