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When a young, British Muslim develops an obsession online with a maniacal and violently motivated con-women, he must attempt to maintain control despite being coerced toward instigating a terror situation on a London commuter train.
Knowing that the women is a violent maniac, his obsession would make him a negative character, with whom it becomes tough/impossible to relate in the role of a protagonist. If he didn't knew, then it need not be a part of the logline...since it is supposed to be from his POV His GOAL "..must attemptRead more
Knowing that the women is a violent maniac, his obsession would make him a negative character, with whom it becomes tough/impossible to relate in the role of a protagonist.
If he didn’t knew, then it need not be a part of the logline…since it is supposed to be from his POV
His GOAL “..must attempt to maintain control” is incomplete; maintain control of what? Rather, it should be to prevent her at all cost (or something tangible like that) from instigating that terror situation…
See lessTwo amateur filmmakers get hired to direct a film. They get excited until they realize that what they’re directing is terrorist propaganda.
Signing off a desperate film deal, when two broke filmmakers realize that their client is a weapons overlord--intent on getting produced (what seems to be) a terrorist propaganda flick--they must________________?? Well...what's their "Objective GOAL" ? Good Luck ARisingDragon
Signing off a desperate film deal, when two broke filmmakers realize that their client is a weapons overlord–intent on getting produced (what seems to be) a terrorist propaganda flick–they must________________??
Well…what’s their “Objective GOAL” ?
Good Luck ARisingDragon
See lessReality is scarier than fiction for a ten-year-old gay kid in small town Indiana in 1982. Based on actual events, one boy?s journey of self-discovery comes to a halt when he hears about a gay cancer that is merely foreshadowing the ignorance, fear, hate and religion that almost ends his life and forever changes his world.
It's certainly a plus if yours is based on actual events. However, you must be specific about the detail that encompass his conflict. How does it go from "his journey of self-discovery coming to a halt.." to "..almost ending his life"? "when he hears about gay cancer.." is your Inciting Incident, riRead more
It’s certainly a plus if yours is based on actual events. However, you must be specific about the detail that encompass his conflict. How does it go from “his journey of self-discovery coming to a halt..” to “..almost ending his life”?
“when he hears about gay cancer..” is your Inciting Incident, right? How does that fling him into ignorance, fear, hate and religion; which has such a wide possibility of plot, suggesting anything can happen…
What becomes his Objective GOAL a result of the Inciting Incident? What is the nature of action must he take to achieve this specific Goal?
Where is your plot headed??
Think in terms of a starting point and an end point.
See lessGood Luck Rick1973