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The world renowned assassin turns himself in to protect his family,but his last contract didn’t go as planned,now every ruthless assassin hunts down his family.
If he's a "world renowned assassin" And he turned himself in That means his family is as good as dead because he can't do sh*t from insideIf you mean his goal is to break out and save them...After failing his last contract, an infamous assassin must break out of prison to save his family from his emRead more
If he’s a “world renowned assassin”
And he turned himself in
That means his family is as good as dead
because he can’t do sh*t from inside
If you mean his goal is to break out and save them…
After failing his last contract, an infamous assassin must break out of prison to save his family from his employers
(throw in some inciting incident too)
See lessA chosen earth gatekeeper must stay alive for 3 hours while the worlds mate,the mate open the gates to both worlds ,aliens seize the opportunity to invade earth,his death keeps the gate open forever and it means death for all mankind.
After an alien gateway opens, the chosen gatekeeper must survive three hours until the eclipse to close the gates and prevent a full scale invasion (25W)he is "the chosen one"..........to survive?! and if his death means the end, why didn't they choose someone better?
After an alien gateway opens, the chosen gatekeeper must survive three hours until the eclipse to close the gates and prevent a full scale invasion (25W)
he is “the chosen one”……….to survive?! and if his death means the end, why didn’t they choose someone better?
See lessA high school student inherits supernatural powers and becomes a vigilante as he attempts to save the rainy city of Seattle from becoming a fiery hell.
His Goal and (thus implied) Conflict are missingIt's wise to quote some dpg from time to time... The only question a logline must raise is "will the protagonist achieve his goal?" But Some questions do pop, like-- how did he gain those powers? what does the city needs saving from?visit the rules secRead more
His Goal and (thus implied) Conflict are missing
It’s wise to quote some dpg from time to time…
The only question a logline must raise is “will the protagonist achieve his goal?”
But
Some questions do pop, like–
how did he gain those powers?
what does the city needs saving from?
visit the rules section
See lessit’s simply awesome..