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An opinionated former cult-member must convince his equally-opinionated family to leave the same cult before they commit the ultimate sacrifice – themselves. TITLE: Born to Die
Agreed with the above, this supercool idea would benefit greatly from a simple inciting event And definitely deluded/brainwashed over opinionated I don't get why he needs to be "former cult member" though. Can he be a member too and this news of the comet shook the cult out of him? Otherwise great fRead more
Agreed with the above, this supercool idea would benefit greatly from a simple inciting event
See lessAnd definitely deluded/brainwashed over opinionated
I don’t get why he needs to be “former cult member” though. Can he be a member too and this news of the comet shook the cult out of him?
Otherwise great film with great stakes!
Best wishes
Sabotaged on her studio debut, a novice filmmaker must produce her blockbuster without funds and with local amateurs to prove herself, before she loses the rights to her script.
Hello! "Challenged by her producer dad, a fresher must make a viral film with studio amateurs to get budget for her debut" (maybe producer dad doesn't work) I like "to get certain thumbs up" so add it in some way __________________________________ In your original version, "sabotaged on her studio dRead more
Hello!
“Challenged by her producer dad, a fresher must make a viral film with studio amateurs to get budget for her debut”
(maybe producer dad doesn’t work)
I like “to get certain thumbs up”
so add it in some way
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In your original version, “sabotaged on her studio debut” was unclear (to me)
Also maybe this definition below is helpful…
Q. What does it mean by to have your script optioned?
A. An Option Agreement is a contract that allows a producer or a studio to obtain the film rights to a writer’s screenplay for a period of time with the goal of making it into a film.
Other than that, I am confused how a writer can loose rights to her script
Best wishes!
See lessWhen he get caught up messing with his business distributor girl, a young upcoming producer must find a way to withstand his business from failing and the woman he fell in love with.
youngDolla; so I read your detail, It's great that his business partner (the distributor guy) would have problem with him fooling around his ex, especially after she dumped him! Still, the Inciting Incident shouldn't be "the distributor finds out" but when the producer falls for her knowing she's exRead more
youngDolla;
so I read your detail,
It’s great that his business partner (the distributor guy) would have problem with him fooling around his ex, especially after she dumped him!
Still, the Inciting Incident shouldn’t be “the distributor finds out” but when the producer falls for her knowing she’s ex of his business partner
Then midpoint can take care of distributor finding out his ex with the producer
So another version could be something like:
“After falling for the girl who dumped his associate, a producer must keep it a secret or risk business he grinded his nights for”
Best wishes for your project
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