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  1. Posted: April 13, 2018In: Romance

    Edit: A teenage boy transforms into a girl overnight when he meets his soulmate. He must find a solution to live with her again meanwhile she turns into a boy.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 13, 2018 at 2:57 am

    So, currently the two of them are a girl (who is a boy) and a boy (who is infact a girl) right? And their goal is to give birth to their saviour... Then what's stopping them from coitus? Without conflict it's hard to frame your plot into a logline. It would read something like: "A boy and girl mustRead more

    So, currently the two of them are a girl (who is a boy) and a boy (who is infact a girl) right?
    And their goal is to give birth to their saviour…

    Then what’s stopping them from coitus?

    Without conflict it’s hard to frame your plot into a logline. It would read something like:
    “A boy and girl must give birth to the guardian of humanity”

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2018In: Romance

    Edit: A teenage boy transforms into a girl overnight when he meets his soulmate. He must find a solution to live with her again meanwhile she turns into a boy.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 13, 2018 at 2:08 am

    It reminds me of Kimi no Na wa (Your Name-2016) by filmmaker Makoto Shinkai "A teenage boy and girl embark on a quest to meet each other for the first time after they magically swap bodies" If you are headed in this direction, you might consider studying this film.

    It reminds me of Kimi no Na wa (Your Name-2016) by filmmaker Makoto Shinkai

    “A teenage boy and girl embark on a quest to meet each other for the first time after they magically swap bodies”

    If you are headed in this direction, you might consider studying this film.

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  3. Posted: April 12, 2018In: Drama

    When he get caught up messing with his business distributor girl, a young upcoming producer must find a way to withstand his business from failing and the woman he fell in love with.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 12, 2018 at 10:28 pm

    you should mention "daughter" for clarity But what's your Inciting event got to do with his goal "to withstand his business from failing and the woman he fell in love with" If he's competent (young and upcoming) and the girl's in love too, what's the distributor got to do anything about that? Even iRead more

    you should mention “daughter” for clarity

    But what’s your Inciting event got to do with his goal “to withstand his business from failing and the woman he fell in love with”

    If he’s competent (young and upcoming) and the girl’s in love too, what’s the distributor got to do anything about that?
    Even if he stops dealing with this “young and upcoming producer”, there are other distributors…

    Are you sure about the conflict?

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