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  1. Posted: April 12, 2018In: Drama

    Over a psychotherapy session, a man with failing marriage and too much history starts falling in love with his female therapist and must be stopped or she’d lose her license

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 12, 2018 at 10:20 pm

    If you're sure about the license thing... "When a troubled man begins fessing his fondness for her, the therapist must convince him otherwise, or risk losing her license" (since she has the objective goal anyway) But there's so much else she could do, "convincing him" seems illogical HER GOAL "to saRead more

    If you’re sure about the license thing…

    “When a troubled man begins fessing his fondness for her, the therapist must convince him otherwise, or risk losing her license”

    (since she has the objective goal anyway)

    But there’s so much else she could do, “convincing him” seems illogical

    HER GOAL “to save her license”
    maybe research some more….

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  2. Posted: April 7, 2018In: Comedy

    A Vegas waitress tripled in size falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her, sacrificing newfound showroom stardom to save him when he’s kidnapped by her abusive ex, a blackmailing mobster and a wealthy, widowed former showgirl.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 6:33 am

    "When the scientist responsible for making her popular is kidnapped by her abusive ex, a vegas waitress sacrifices her newfound stardom to rescue him" All other detail is unnecessary Good luck Vincent J. Paterno!

    “When the scientist responsible for making her popular is kidnapped by her abusive ex, a vegas waitress sacrifices her newfound stardom to rescue him”

    All other detail is unnecessary
    Good luck Vincent J. Paterno!

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Crime

    After a rape victim loses in court from the suspect?s influential family, she emerges as the leader of “broken”, a group of similar cases prepared to bring justice by necessary evil

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    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 1:07 am

    I thought hard. It's something I'd watch. It hangs entirely on creating truly despicable rapists. I'd want them mutilated. But I'm not the only one watching it. ...but who decides "the thin line" your protagonist will cross? If you continue on this, make sure you justify the subject. I want to see hRead more

    I thought hard. It’s something I’d watch.

    It hangs entirely on creating truly despicable rapists. I’d want them mutilated. But I’m not the only one watching it.

    …but who decides “the thin line” your protagonist will cross?

    If you continue on this, make sure you justify the subject. I want to see her dark side as well.

    Good luck for this project

    PS. In which time and space is it based?

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