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After killing his boss a concaine enraged drug dealer goes on a sleep deprived 48 hour murderous rampage attempting take control of the drug network.
I am aiming for an unlikeable protagonist. Means they have to be compelling, a good challenge. Think "a clockwork orange" or "taxi driver" or "the social network" or even "night crawler" all unlikeable protagonists. I don't like my character, but I can't stop thinking about him. I am not an expert iRead more
I am aiming for an unlikeable protagonist. Means they have to be compelling, a good challenge.
Think “a clockwork orange” or “taxi driver” or “the social network” or even “night crawler” all unlikeable protagonists. I don’t like my character, but I can’t stop thinking about him.
I am not an expert in drug culture, so the drug and how it effects will come out in the research. The idea is a feeling of God-like superiority and a lack of sleep drives his mania that finally leads to his own death.
The original scenario he is fighting against happens anyway. So all the killing and what he loses is all for nothing. This, I hope, gives the audience a final smack of last minute empathy.
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Thanks I like hearing other people take on a line, I hate writing loglines. The 48 hours was trying to make it feel frantic and claustrophobic. I like your take on it.
Thanks I like hearing other people take on a line, I hate writing loglines. The 48 hours was trying to make it feel frantic and claustrophobic. I like your take on it.
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Really like it. The one thing I would be more specific with is the debt. Some clarity would be great, his bookmaker or loan shark, something that gives us clarity. You could try you add motivation around why he has the debt or something around the criminal, but I think it works well without it.
Really like it. The one thing I would be more specific with is the debt. Some clarity would be great, his bookmaker or loan shark, something that gives us clarity.
You could try you add motivation around why he has the debt or something around the criminal, but I think it works well without it.
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