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  1. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    ?After being tricked into an symbiotic relationship with a brilliant but evil alien wanting to take over Earth, a clumsy neurosurgeon must quickly choose between operating himself or be operated by the perverted exercise of power.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 11, 2015 at 8:09 am

    I'd lose the references on the front. Did you miss a word? Operate on himself? Or is it a hint that the Alien is controlling him? Plus Clumsy I find strange. Perhaps it works really effectively in the story, but Neurosurgery is the one job that tends to weed out the clumsy. This also reads a bit likRead more

    I’d lose the references on the front.

    Did you miss a word? Operate on himself? Or is it a hint that the Alien is controlling him?

    Plus Clumsy I find strange. Perhaps it works really effectively in the story, but Neurosurgery is the one job that tends to weed out the clumsy.

    This also reads a bit like a setting.

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    9 years after the sanguinary massacre of the royal family of demons, planned by the United States, Barbara, one of the two sisters who escaped the massacre, seeks revenge and is in search to find her 10 year old sister, who was later abducted by the government of the United States, because of her sister's godly black magic abilities that could be used to turn the United States into a worldwide empire and to resurrect Goddess Isis, of Babylon. 17 year old terrorist Barbara forces the son of the president of the United States to betray his own country and join her on the expedition to find her sister, which leads to the revelation of the grotesque plans the United States (Illuminati) has up its sleeve and the end of everything.

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    Added an answer on April 11, 2015 at 7:57 am

    A demon sets out to rescue her abducted sister and avenger the massacre of her people by the USA. You can add a ticking clock as well ....before the government can launch a plan to end everything. What you have it too long, yet not long enough to be a synopsis.

    A demon sets out to rescue her abducted sister and avenger the massacre of her people by the USA.

    You can add a ticking clock as well

    ….before the government can launch a plan to end everything.

    What you have it too long, yet not long enough to be a synopsis.

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2015In: Public

    ?An unassuming young gentleman, still struggling to find his place in the world, must face off with the 19th Century?s greatest criminal Kingpin to rescue his childhood sweetheart from a life of sexual servitude and topple the criminal conspiracy which may lead all the way to the Royal Family?

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 6, 2015 at 11:10 pm

    She could also be a minor mcguffin. Think of her as the head piece in the first Indiana Jones movie. The first event or obstacle that leads to a bigger more complex challenge. While rescuing her he discovers all this stuff. Then you have only one question, why would he care.

    She could also be a minor mcguffin. Think of her as the head piece in the first Indiana Jones movie. The first event or obstacle that leads to a bigger more complex challenge. While rescuing her he discovers all this stuff. Then you have only one question, why would he care.

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