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  1. Posted: January 30, 2015In: Public

    A girl in the Old West becomes the town judge, just before her outlaw aunt shows up.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 30, 2015 at 12:29 pm

    What does she want to achieve and what is preventing her from doing it? Or even what does she believe and what challenges her belief. Just saying "Judge" does not mean lawful in the Old West. Look at "Judge Roy Bean" (great movie) a highly corrupt Judge (self appointed). You can leave questions unanRead more

    What does she want to achieve and what is preventing her from doing it? Or even what does she believe and what challenges her belief. Just saying “Judge” does not mean lawful in the Old West. Look at “Judge Roy Bean” (great movie) a highly corrupt Judge (self appointed).

    You can leave questions unanswered in a tag line, that is marketing and needs to raise questions.

    Your logline should give the reader information and raise the question “How did you resolve that conflict”, not “I wonder what the conflict may be”.

    I hope that helps.

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2015In: Public

    A man with a rare medical condition has to decide between embracing his final months alive or undertaking an experimental procedure that could extend his life or end it. For #meetup

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2015 at 11:31 am

    I have a question. What is his motivation to stay alive? Life itself is not normally enough. That is why isolation is a punishment. People need a reason to live. Friends, family, a missed opportunity. Tell what he is risking other than a few months. Make me care about his decision. Good skeleton, IRead more

    I have a question. What is his motivation to stay alive? Life itself is not normally enough. That is why isolation is a punishment. People need a reason to live. Friends, family, a missed opportunity. Tell what he is risking other than a few months. Make me care about his decision. Good skeleton, I want to see some meat.

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2015In: Public

    A man with a rare medical condition has to decide between embracing his final months alive or undertaking an experimental procedure that could extend his life or end it. For #meetup

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 25, 2015 at 11:31 am

    I have a question. What is his motivation to stay alive? Life itself is not normally enough. That is why isolation is a punishment. People need a reason to live. Friends, family, a missed opportunity. Tell what he is risking other than a few months. Make me care about his decision. Good skeleton, IRead more

    I have a question. What is his motivation to stay alive? Life itself is not normally enough. That is why isolation is a punishment. People need a reason to live. Friends, family, a missed opportunity. Tell what he is risking other than a few months. Make me care about his decision. Good skeleton, I want to see some meat.

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