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A scientist builds a satellite system that ends World War III; then must find a way to disable it to prevent another holocaust in the battle of Armageddon.
Leaving aside any theological issues (I'm reasonably sure no one would be able to stop Armageddon, but let's face it, that's never stopped Hollywood before!)... This is a pretty decent logline. The only problem is that the reader's first instinct is to think "How could a computer system cause a BiblRead more
Leaving aside any theological issues (I’m reasonably sure no one would be able to stop Armageddon, but let’s face it, that’s never stopped Hollywood before!)… This is a pretty decent logline. The only problem is that the reader’s first instinct is to think “How could a computer system cause a Biblical event?” so I think you need to find a way of hinting at that in the logline, preferably without making it much longer…
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That's fine. There may be a way to boil it down just a little further, remove one or two words here and there, but generally, that works really well.
That’s fine. There may be a way to boil it down just a little further, remove one or two words here and there, but generally, that works really well.
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That's a good question. I suppose a movie logline presents the hero with one problem s/he has to solve by the end of the movie; a TV show logline creates a world with characters who we'll see living their lives, dealing with a different problem every week.
That’s a good question. I suppose a movie logline presents the hero with one problem s/he has to solve by the end of the movie; a TV show logline creates a world with characters who we’ll see living their lives, dealing with a different problem every week.
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