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Tired of being told she doesn't take risks, a nerdy mathematician creates an ingenious problem and proclaims; slay the dragon, get the girl.
Of course, if she was a geneticist, she could create a real dragon. Now *that* would be a fun movie! Okay, not what you're going for. But still... :)
Of course, if she was a geneticist, she could create a real dragon. Now *that* would be a fun movie! Okay, not what you’re going for. But still… 🙂
See lessA devastated 14 year old girl and her seemingly psychotic brother hoping for a better life with their affluent father after he won a divorce proceedings discover that his home turns out to be a prison of misfortunes in which they have to find a means of escape.
Okay, there's a lot of things all pulling in different directions at the moment. A few questions: why is the girl "devastated"? What happened to her? Is her brother actually psychotic? What has he done to deserve that diagnosis, especially as a teenager? Is he receiving psychiatric help? What is a "Read more
Okay, there’s a lot of things all pulling in different directions at the moment. A few questions: why is the girl “devastated”? What happened to her? Is her brother actually psychotic? What has he done to deserve that diagnosis, especially as a teenager? Is he receiving psychiatric help?
What is a “prison of misfortunes”? Can you be more specific about the problems they’re facing? Is their father causing the problems? If so: deliberately, or accidentally? “Misfortunes” are technically things that happen by accident, no one’s fault, and I suspect that’s not actually what you mean here…
See lessTired of being told she doesn't take risks, a nerdy mathematician creates an ingenious problem and proclaims; slay the dragon, get the girl.
i like the basic idea, but here's my problem... The best loglines give a real sense of what will happen in the story. "James Bond must bankrupt a terrorist in a casino" or "a lawyer can't tell a lie for 24 hours". What your logline suggests to me is that the movie will consist of nerds doing math prRead more
i like the basic idea, but here’s my problem… The best loglines give a real sense of what will happen in the story. “James Bond must bankrupt a terrorist in a casino” or “a lawyer can’t tell a lie for 24 hours”. What your logline suggests to me is that the movie will consist of nerds doing math problems. I’m sure it won’t be, but…
So, how can you give a better sense of what the action of the story is in the logline?
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