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When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.
I think the guru has some satanic ambitions. I can't add this kind of details in the logline, if the logline doesn't work there must be something else.
I think the guru has some satanic ambitions. I can’t add this kind of details in the logline, if the logline doesn’t work there must be something else.
See lessWhen her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.
I take this as a compliment :) I didn't know this book, I'll go check it.
I take this as a compliment 🙂 I didn’t know this book, I’ll go check it.
See lessA cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?
I think the problem is that the logline is too vague. What makes this film stand out of all the movies where a girl is kinapped by a psychopath? What is precisely the "sadistic game" they play? What does the girl precisely do to put him our of play? If the fact that the girl outwits the psychopath iRead more
I think the problem is that the logline is too vague. What makes this film stand out of all the movies where a girl is kinapped by a psychopath? What is precisely the “sadistic game” they play? What does the girl precisely do to put him our of play?
If the fact that the girl outwits the psychopath is a final surprise you should skip this detail. If she dominates in some way (how?) the psychopath, this must be better explained in the logline.
I think about The bunny game, a torture movie in black and white with almost only 2 character, the girl and the psycho- I don’t think the logline of this movie can be really exciting (but the movie is excellent in my opinion)
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