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  1. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    Twenty years after the horrific slaying of a family, terrified townsfolk wait in fear for the imminent return of the menacing monster that was put away for the crime.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2015 at 11:02 pm

    What happens when the murderer arrives in town? What do we see?

    What happens when the murderer arrives in town? What do we see?

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2015 at 8:08 pm

    Hello, I'm a bit lost now, I should mention that the screenwriters are kept prisoner, so they can play the game or die. The idea is that each writer must choose a writer as victim in a death scene (he can choose to be himself a victim but that would be a suicide), then the guru kills the writer whoRead more

    Hello, I’m a bit lost now,

    I should mention that the screenwriters are kept prisoner, so they can play the game or die.

    The idea is that each writer must choose a writer as victim in a death scene (he can choose to be himself a victim but that would be a suicide), then the guru kills the writer who stars in the best scripted scene. They must play the game: pick a victim and write at their best to survive. If someone is reluctant to write at his best, he is tortured. If the guru dies the house is irradiated by anthrax and everybody dies.

    Is credibility really an issue here?

    I don’t think I should bring supernatural elements.

    I think the theme is what motivate an author to write a horror.

    Any of these has some kind of potential?

    1)
    “When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.”

    2)
    When a group of aspiring screenwriters join a ?horror? screenwriting workshop, a perverse guru kepts them prisoner and sets up a deadly training game where the writers die like their characters so that only the best one will survive?

    3)
    When a wealthy psychopath invites the best horror screenwriters to a symposium in his isolated country house, he kepts them prisoner and sets up a deadly game where his guests must write the best horror scenes or die like their characters?

    THANK YOU VERY MUCH

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on July 29, 2015 at 1:36 am

    Will you be more interested in this kind of logline? : "When a group of aspiring screenwriters join a 'horror' screenwriting workshop, perverse guru sets up a deadly training game where the writers die like their characters so that only the best one will survive" Or, "When a wealthy psychopath invitRead more

    Will you be more interested in this kind of logline? :

    “When a group of aspiring screenwriters join a ‘horror’ screenwriting workshop, perverse guru sets up a deadly training game where the writers die like their characters so that only the best one will survive”

    Or,

    “When a wealthy psychopath invites the best horror screenwriters to a symposium in his isolated country house, he sets up a deadly game where his guests must write the best horror scenes or die like their characters”

    This one can be interesting because I can easily come up with a motivation for the main character, something like a son who died because of a horror movie. Maybe the guests are not only screenwriters but many people who worked for that movie. Or maybe all this is too clich?? I think that the setting of a screenwriting workshop is more original.

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