1. Posted: July 28, 2015In:

    A cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?

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    I recommend to watch Hard Candy who is structured about a similar idea: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0424136/?ref_=kw_li_tt

    I recommend to watch Hard Candy who is structured about a similar idea: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0424136/?ref_=kw_li_tt

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In:

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    "When her agent threats to drop her unless she takes a new turn in her career, a shy 'love story' author attends a horror movie workshop where a perverse guru makes the aspiring screenwriters die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive."

    “When her agent threats to drop her unless she takes a new turn in her career, a shy ‘love story’ author attends a horror movie workshop where a perverse guru makes the aspiring screenwriters die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.”

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2015In:

    This is Jess. She IS a waitress. She is having an existential crisis, and the customers are NOT helping.

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    Hello, this sounds more like a tagline than a logline. Have a look at this: https://loglines.org/howto/

    Hello, this sounds more like a tagline than a logline. Have a look at this: https://loglines.org/howto/

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