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  1. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2015 at 6:24 pm

    I'll try a different angle to face or avoid all problems.

    I’ll try a different angle to face or avoid all problems.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2015 at 6:23 pm

    Sure, I understand what you mean. In reading a synospis of chuck palaniuk's novel I see some similarities and I see that he did it really good and surely better than what I can do- I'm still proud to have had some small ideas that palaniuk had :) of course I must differenciate from his work becauseRead more

    Sure, I understand what you mean. In reading a synospis of chuck palaniuk’s novel I see some similarities and I see that he did it really good and surely better than what I can do- I’m still proud to have had some small ideas that palaniuk had 🙂 of course I must differenciate from his work because now that I know it (thanks to your comment) I don’t want to do the same. I think that there is still some place in this zone of survival plot with writers as characters.

    I just want to point out that even in a 10 lines synopsis we don’t know why the host kidnapped them, and we ignore what motivates the writers to join the workshop. Probably in the novel all this is clear but does-it belongs to a one sentence logline?

    I’m gonna buy the novel immedialtely because this is just the kind of story that I love. And thanks again for your comment! And they’re doing a movie from the book.

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2015In: Public

    A cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?

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    Hello, I don't think that the logline exercise is really useful for a short film. Anyway dgp rewrite is just perfect, expecially for a short film.

    Hello, I don’t think that the logline exercise is really useful for a short film. Anyway dgp rewrite is just perfect, expecially for a short film.

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