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When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.
Hello, me too I'm confused about who has what - I think this need a rewrite before further analysis. (is it for a short or a feature?)
Hello, me too I’m confused about who has what – I think this need a rewrite before further analysis. (is it for a short or a feature?)
See lessin the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.
I think it can be set IN THE PRESENT. There are many more or less secret prisons where ANYTHING happens right today.
I think it can be set IN THE PRESENT. There are many more or less secret prisons where ANYTHING happens right today.
See lessin the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.
Even if the prisoner is a bad guy I can't root for a torturer who tortures him for money. And who is the opponent in act 2? A 'bad' prisoner in chains wo get tortured? I don't think he can be a valid opponent. Try to focus on your main character, what happens in his life that put the story in motionRead more
Even if the prisoner is a bad guy I can’t root for a torturer who tortures him for money. And who is the opponent in act 2? A ‘bad’ prisoner in chains wo get tortured? I don’t think he can be a valid opponent.
Try to focus on your main character, what happens in his life that put the story in motion, and how the main character deals with it; what is his goal and who is the opponent. You don’t even need to mention a 3rd act revelation, in my opinion.
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