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A retired golf enthusiast is scammed out of his life savings and a country club membership, but when he sees an old man die and moves up to number five on the waiting list, he devises a killer plan to jump to #1
Hello, Costa-Gavras did a movie about a desperate man who kill all the best candidates to have a job. It's a black comedy, I liked it a lot. imdb: "Le couperet" A chemist loses his job to outsourcing. Two years later and still jobless, he hits on a solution: to genuinely eliminate his competition. IRead more
Hello, Costa-Gavras did a movie about a desperate man who kill all the best candidates to have a job.
It’s a black comedy, I liked it a lot.
imdb:
“Le couperet”
A chemist loses his job to outsourcing. Two years later and still jobless, he hits on a solution: to genuinely eliminate his competition.
I think the key is to make the logline funny so that we understand that the movie is a satire and we don’t judge the main character as we would do in a serious movie. I suggest to make a joke linked to the golf world (I hope you’re an expert about the subject, or you have to become one before even come up with a decent logline 🙂 ) -you need something like “genuinely eliminate the competition”.
See lessAn optimistic and energetic freshman just wants to fit in his first year in high school, but that all changes when he meets a girl who he thought he would never see again, and is propelled on a path that could very well change the meaning of ?fitting in?.
Hello, be always very specific, who is the girl, what path, what change... a logline doesn't tease, it's an exact extreme synthetisis of the movie. Don't forget to give a clear goal to the protagonist, and make clear why the girl is an opponent.
Hello, be always very specific, who is the girl, what path, what change… a logline doesn’t tease, it’s an exact extreme synthetisis of the movie. Don’t forget to give a clear goal to the protagonist, and make clear why the girl is an opponent.
See lessin the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.
Unless this is a short, built on a quick twist and that's all.
Unless this is a short, built on a quick twist and that’s all.
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