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A worker gets an email that he won a million dollars but his boss wants to steal it from him so they agree to battle each other in a nerf gun war.
Sure, how wan they "agree" on this? this must be clarified in the logline.
Sure, how wan they “agree” on this? this must be clarified in the logline.
See less"A CIA agent pulled out of retirement is tasked with [Stakes: capturing a terrorist in Palestine] which is his [antag: estranged daughter]. Will he follow his heart or serve his country?"
"When the plan to attack the Israeli-Palestinian peace summit is discoverd, a retired jewish CIA agent must stop the fanatical suicide-bomber ? his own daughter". Is the movie already written? Because I would suggest to let the Agent retired while he investigates the case privately, in the (false?)Read more
“When the plan to attack the Israeli-Palestinian peace summit is discoverd, a retired jewish CIA agent must stop the fanatical suicide-bomber ? his own daughter”.
Is the movie already written? Because I would suggest to let the Agent retired while he investigates the case privately, in the (false?) hope to save the summit AND his daughter.
See lessI imagine a friend of the retired agent who come to him to ask for his advice, but he understands that maybe his own daughter is involved and go in the summit’s city to investigate. So CIA would be a kind of antagonists to him as well as the terrorists – I see a lot of potential conflict!
A man at his job in the office, discovers an email that states he has won a free 1 week trip to the millionaire host's house (which is hidden from civilization). little did he know that the host is an insane psychopathic maniac and tries to harm him and turn him into a panda bear and smuggle him across the US. now it's up to the main character to escape with his life, find civilization, and get help.
Hello, "a man" is too vague as a description for the main character. You have to focus on the most important elements to make the logline shorter. For exemple: "When a clumsy clerk win a week at a millionaire's mansion in the middle of the jungle, he find himself prisoner of his crazy host and mustRead more
Hello, “a man” is too vague as a description for the main character.
You have to focus on the most important elements to make the logline shorter.
For exemple:
“When a clumsy clerk win a week at a millionaire’s mansion in the middle of the jungle, he find himself prisoner of his crazy host and must escape before being turned into a panda bear.”
And if it’s a comedy (I hope so) you should use a funnier style in the logline.
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