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  1. Posted: June 19, 2015In: Public

    In the summer of '65, four friends make a mad dash to Vegas to get married before midnight to avoid facing the Vietnam draft.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 5:59 pm

    I have no idea if to get married was a real solution, you should check this. Are the 4 friends 2 couples (better to specify), or do they get the brides on location? I like this logline.

    I have no idea if to get married was a real solution, you should check this.

    Are the 4 friends 2 couples (better to specify), or do they get the brides on location?

    I like this logline.

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  2. Posted: June 17, 2015In: Public

    When a self-absorbed soapie star stops receiving fan mail from his most obsessive fan he embarks on an relentless mission to find out why.

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    Added an answer on June 17, 2015 at 10:43 pm

    Hello. This is an interesting concept. I see 2 problems. 1- the stakes are not very high (what happens if she fails?) 2- is the movie about the journey (meeting with the fan is the 3rd act), or is it a movie about the meeting with the fan? In both cases I think you should include some detail to haveRead more

    Hello.

    This is an interesting concept.
    I see 2 problems.

    1- the stakes are not very high (what happens if she fails?)
    2- is the movie about the journey (meeting with the fan is the 3rd act), or is it a movie about the meeting with the fan? In both cases I think you should include some detail to have a better understango fo the plot. Maybe you should include why the fan stop sending mails (if this would not be spoiling the ending)

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Public

    the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.

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    Added an answer on June 17, 2015 at 8:26 pm

    I like this angle.

    I like this angle.

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