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  1. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Examples

    When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2015 at 7:50 pm

    there's a bug in the website, if this is an existing movie the logline belongs to the "classic" page, not here.

    there’s a bug in the website, if this is an existing movie the logline belongs to the “classic” page, not here.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Public

    The last surving man on the planet goes on the run from tribes of horny women, desperate to be impreginated. Responsibility is the last thing this homosexual manchild wants.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2015 at 6:24 pm

    Hello, it's an interesting concept but you have to come up with an idea to make the main character active -not passive as he is now. You should also include the incint event- what is the specific event who put the story in motion?

    Hello, it’s an interesting concept but you have to come up with an idea to make the main character active -not passive as he is now. You should also include the incint event- what is the specific event who put the story in motion?

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Public

    When a Governors daughter is kidnapped, a remorseful gang banger is recruited as part of an elite team to rescue her.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2015 at 5:55 pm

    Hello, I don't want to be mean to you but- do you actually write this or you are testing a beta version of an automatic logline software? I give you a very good advice, before writing, you should read a lot of logline guides on the internet and maybe buy some books (I recommend Truby's "anathomy ofRead more

    Hello, I don’t want to be mean to you but- do you actually write this or you are testing a beta version of an automatic logline software? I give you a very good advice, before writing, you should read a lot of logline guides on the internet and maybe buy some books (I recommend Truby’s “anathomy of a story” who has a good chapter about loglines), because in reading your concepts it seems to me that you have to study the very basic of screenwriting- you can’t skip this step or you’l write 1000 logines without writing anything good. Hope this helps!

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