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  1. Posted: June 17, 2015In: Public

    When a woman is imprisoned by a crazed vivisectionist, she must win the trust of the hybrids in order to escape and save her friends.

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    Hello, you can add an adjective to describe the main character. Then it would help to explain clearly what/who are the hybrids/her friends. The logic that links the trust of the hybrids and the main character's escape is not very strong. Finally, according tho this logline, I expect a 'prison movie'Read more

    Hello, you can add an adjective to describe the main character.
    Then it would help to explain clearly what/who are the hybrids/her friends.
    The logic that links the trust of the hybrids and the main character’s escape is not very strong.
    Finally, according tho this logline, I expect a ‘prison movie’ where the main character must deal with strange creatures to escape: I found it interesting but a maybe a little ‘poor’- think about the richness of “the island of dr. moreau” ‘s plot.
    You can add some stakes like “before she’s transformed into some kind of creature”

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Public

    the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2015 at 10:53 pm

    Hello, I miss a clear main character - even in "seven samurais" there was a main character

    Hello, I miss a clear main character – even in “seven samurais” there was a main character

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Examples

    When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.

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    Added an answer on June 16, 2015 at 7:52 pm

    the post should be erased or transfered to the "classic" page.

    the post should be erased or transfered to the “classic” page.

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