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When a series of unsolved murders turn up in a remote part of spain in the 1980’s, two ill – matched detectives must solve a cities darkest secrets revealing the shocking truth.
expressions forbidden in a logline: -darkest secrets -revealing the shocking truth If I ask you know to tell me in 5 seconds what are this darkest secrets and shoking truth, are you sure you can answer? A logline is not a game of throwing vague mysteries and random secrets. It's about a solid structRead more
expressions forbidden in a logline:
-darkest secrets
-revealing the shocking truth
If I ask you know to tell me in 5 seconds what are this darkest secrets and shoking truth, are you sure you can answer? A logline is not a game of throwing vague mysteries and random secrets. It’s about a solid structure with all the elements weel connected. Why 2 detectives?
See lessYou deperately need a plot, not a setting. What if it’s the 90 in france… who cares? If you nale a country it must be a country that match other elements in the logline. It’s a good exercise to write down a hundred of ‘things’ like this one, but then you have to chose the one that is the most promising and work to solidify the structure with weel chosen elements, and THEn you have a viable logline.
When a Chicago shootout is witnessed by two wily male musicians they must travel by train disguised as show girls to evade capture.
is this a remake of 'some like it hot'?
is this a remake of ‘some like it hot’?
See lessWhen an over-curious hunter tragically disappears, the local townsfolk begin unravelling the legend of a fearsome predator stalking the rugged gorges of the River.
Hello, as the hunter is not the main character there is absolutely no need to spend an adjective to describe it as over curious - this is not important for the story. Besides, you need a compelling main character to be described with a very good chosen adjective. Think about 1) main character, 2) hiRead more
Hello, as the hunter is not the main character there is absolutely no need to spend an adjective to describe it as over curious – this is not important for the story.
Besides, you need a compelling main character to be described with a very good chosen adjective.
Think about 1) main character, 2) his goal, 3) the opponent or oppenents forces, -you have an inciting event but it is not related to the personal story of your main character. The inciting event must be connected to the main plot.
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