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  1. Posted: May 28, 2015In: Public

    When the bodyless talking brains of the most brilliant scientists want to leave the country, their simple minded transporter must learn to use his head to pass the frontier before the government or the resistance get their hands on them.

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    Added an answer on May 28, 2015 at 7:38 am

    Ok! this is a very different angle! What I like in my logline is the irony of a simple man who must deal with the 'living brains' of 13 scientists... The MC will learn and grow and will take his own decision about what to do with the brains. It's more a comedy than a thriller. Thanks for 'living braRead more

    Ok! this is a very different angle! What I like in my logline is the irony of a simple man who must deal with the ‘living brains’ of 13 scientists… The MC will learn and grow and will take his own decision about what to do with the brains. It’s more a comedy than a thriller. Thanks for ‘living brains’: it’s better than just ‘brains”

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2015In: Public

    After her teenage sister commits a sudden suicide, an anxiety-disordered young woman returns to her childhood home and begins to discover family secrets that lead her to investigate the tragedy.

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    Added an answer on May 27, 2015 at 6:38 am

    I'm 100% agree with the previous comment.

    I’m 100% agree with the previous comment.

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  3. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    Extraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 10:32 am

    "Note: This list doesn't include any movies where the world is destroyed at the beginning or in the middle ? just at the end." I think that in this logline the world is (almost) completely destroyed at the beginning so this is a very different situation but maybe I didn't understand the logline. I'mRead more

    “Note: This list doesn’t include any movies where the world is destroyed at the beginning or in the middle ? just at the end.”

    I think that in this logline the world is (almost) completely destroyed at the beginning so this is a very different situation but maybe I didn’t understand the logline.

    I’m looking foreward to read some more accomplished versions of the logline.

    Anyway, this kind of story is tricky: I don’t think the destruction of the heart can be a true inciting event, it is not enough personal to the main character. There must be something more precise like “when his family is exterminated by the alien invaders, one of the very last survivors on earth…” or maybe the inciting event could be some kind of discovery: “when the last survivor on earth finds some nuclear weapons in a cave…”

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