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When his bride loses her memory of him a week before the wedding, an unromantic guy's guy must restore it by recreating their courtship?s most romantic moments or face losing the love of his life.
very good LOVENESIA and the tag line "they're to be married but she soesn't know" If you want to go deep into comedy, it could be a rare disease, a kind of amnesia who shake lovers before marriage - watch ZEROPHILIA, about a rare genetic disease - I watched it just because of the title! In this filmRead more
very good LOVENESIA
and the tag line “they’re to be married but she soesn’t know”
If you want to go deep into comedy, it could be a rare disease, a kind of amnesia who shake lovers before marriage – watch ZEROPHILIA, about a rare genetic disease – I watched it just because of the title!
See lessIn this film the shrink explain what is zerophilia and how to cure it, in your case the shrink can have the same role: he tells the rules to restore the memory so no more problem about medical realism, you just have to be true to the rules of your movie.
When a depressed hammerhead shark befriends a therapeutic dolphin, his incompetant shrink – a wite shark – wants to violently stop the healing process.
Hello,*I like a lot the idea, the problem in my opinion is that your logline seems to put the white shark in the role of the main character. This join a little the previous comment. I like te friendship between tha hammer and the dolphin. And it's a true story. Good. Maybe you should go for an incitRead more
Hello,*I like a lot the idea,
the problem in my opinion is that your logline seems to put the white shark in the role of the main character. This join a little the previous comment.
I like te friendship between tha hammer and the dolphin. And it’s a true story. Good.
Maybe you should go for an inciting event who create a menace to this friendship or to the dolphin.
For exemple:
“when his shrink -a white shark- learns about the friendship between his depressed patient -an hammerhead shark- and a gentle dolphin, the hammerhead shark must defie the rules of his fish society to find his true nature”.
Or maybe the strange couple of friends leave the society to find a mythic sea where their frienship is accepted.
Anyway, I think you have to focus about you main character, make him active, and find a valid inciting incident.
Then sell to pixar 🙂
Dig it, the friendship between the hammershark and the dolphin has a true potential.
See lessExtraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.
Hello, If my understandig of the logline is correct, I don't agree with the previous comment because I can't remember a movie where extraterrestrials really destroy humanity (only "hitchikers guide"). I saw many times an invasion and an attempt to destroy humanity. If you're story is really about aRead more
Hello,
See lessIf my understandig of the logline is correct, I don’t agree with the previous comment because I can’t remember a movie where extraterrestrials really destroy humanity (only “hitchikers guide”). I saw many times an invasion and an attempt to destroy humanity. If you’re story is really about a lonely survivor who wants to take his revenge, I’m interested! The only movie I can think of is “last man on heart” and the 2 remakes “I am legend” – but they were vampires and it was more about healing the humanity (you should watch this movies anyway).
The real problem is that the logline only describes the beginning of the movie and doesn’t tell much about the plot. Can you include some details about what really happens in the movie, what we will see in the movie?