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  1. Posted: May 5, 2015In: Student Loglines

    After being augmented against her will, a street-girl from a futuristic city must avoid capture by both former allies as well as the wealthy caste — sparking a civil war in which only the strongest survive.

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    Added an answer on May 7, 2015 at 2:36 am

    If her goal is to survive then revenge is not a solution and to destroy the cybernetic center can't help. "When a street girl is transformed into a deadly cyborg with a short life expectancy, she..."

    If her goal is to survive then revenge is not a solution and to destroy the cybernetic center can’t help.

    “When a street girl is transformed into a deadly cyborg with a short life expectancy, she…”

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  2. Posted: May 5, 2015In: Public

    When an armoured aircraft containing millions crash lands in a post apocalyptic desert,A young and innocent hunter must travel down a dangerous road and battle against an assortment of motley, money hungry mercenaries in order to to be the first to the crash site to rescue her brother, before it becomes a deadly war zone.

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    Added an answer on May 7, 2015 at 12:17 am

    Or you can abandon the post-apocalyptic idea. If you want to use some hi-tech gadgets and crazy weapons it can just be a little further in the future. By the way, I suggested 'a highly precious cargo' so you can come up with something original in the script, something that fits with a post-apocalyptRead more

    Or you can abandon the post-apocalyptic idea. If you want to use some hi-tech gadgets and crazy weapons it can just be a little further in the future.

    By the way, I suggested ‘a highly precious cargo’ so you can come up with something original in the script, something that fits with a post-apocalyptic world.

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  3. Posted: May 5, 2015In: Student Loglines

    After being augmented against her will, a street-girl from a futuristic city must avoid capture by both former allies as well as the wealthy caste — sparking a civil war in which only the strongest survive.

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    Added an answer on May 7, 2015 at 12:09 am

    If I understand it correctly, the girl is in the middle of a war between the 'poor' and the 'wealthy/augmented' and everyone is against her (the poor are against her because now she is 'augmented', the wealthy because she's a rebel). This logline is trickier than I thought. "a street-girl from a futRead more

    If I understand it correctly, the girl is in the middle of a war between the ‘poor’ and the ‘wealthy/augmented’ and everyone is against her (the poor are against her because now she is ‘augmented’, the wealthy because she’s a rebel).

    This logline is trickier than I thought.

    “a street-girl from a futuristic city endeavors to destroy the company that captured her”: I still think this goal is not very compelling. Why does she need to do this? She gained new superpowers for free. Focus about her real problem.

    Revenge is not as easy as it may seem. Think about what happened to “the bride” in kill bill. V for vendetta (and he has a big goal).

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