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  1. Posted: March 22, 2016In: Crime

    In the spirit of Christmas Eve, an officer lets a drag queen go free. But when the decapitated body turns up in a dumpster, he must find the murderer to clear his name and conscience.

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    Added an answer on March 22, 2016 at 7:35 pm

    Me too I miss some details about the main plot. The drag queen is the strongest element here (by the way, why was she arrested?). If possible, I won't go for an "estranged brother" relationship (there are soooo?many estranged brothers/sisters/parents/sons on this website). And why "clear his name"?Read more

    Me too I miss some details about the main plot. The drag queen is the strongest element here (by the way, why was she arrested?). If possible, I won’t go for an “estranged brother” relationship (there are soooo?many estranged brothers/sisters/parents/sons on this website). And why “clear his name”? Is the cop a suspect? ?If so, this could be better said. And about “his conscience”, I don’t think it’s important to mention it in the logline, because it’s kind of evident, and because it’s weak (Maybe it will be clear in the movie, but in the logline I can’t imagine how his concience can be affected by an imprevisible effect of his generosity). One last thing, try to give a characterization to the cop – what is his flow?

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  2. Posted: March 22, 2016In: Drama

    After his bisexual girlfriend commits suicide after being harrassed by an ex boyfriend, A man finds his purpose by supporting gay rights.

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    Added an answer on March 22, 2016 at 7:17 pm

    Hello, I can't picture what there will be in the movie, visually. The?beginning is clear, the girl committing suicide, but then what happens? Try to add an adjective to characterize the "man".

    Hello, I can’t picture what there will be in the movie, visually. The?beginning is clear, the girl committing suicide, but then what happens?
    Try to add an adjective to characterize the “man”.

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2016In: Thriller

    An abused-at-home teenager finds himself in a school for special people where a wicked over-authoritative nurse suppresses rebellion by slowly turning all teenagers into vegetables.

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    Added an answer on March 20, 2016 at 9:51 pm

    As far as I'm concerned, I think vegetables means apathetic, ?but it would be so much better if there would be a supernatural flavour. I d like the idea of kids turning into vegetables. Anyway, there must be some kind of goal for the main character.

    As far as I’m concerned, I think vegetables means apathetic, ?but it would be so much better if there would be a supernatural flavour. I d like the idea of kids turning into vegetables. Anyway, there must be some kind of goal for the main character.

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