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When an evil force bent on total destruction is discovered to be heading towards Earth, a jaded taxi driver must protect a messianic being and help her find 4 ancient artefacts that will save the world, all while keeping a group of alien bounty hunters at bay.
Hello, I think you have all the main elements ! I?suggest to work on a shorter version, there is some redoundance between 'help' 'protect', adn 'keeping the bounty hunters away'.
Hello,
See lessI think you have all the main elements ! I?suggest to work on a shorter version, there is some redoundance between ‘help’ ‘protect’, adn ‘keeping the bounty hunters away’.
When a group of holidaying students wake up to find themselves buried up to their necks on an isolated beach amidst the rising tide, they are left with nothing but a note telling them they are being watched, and among them is a mole. They must figure out who that is if they want to survive.
Hello, this is a great?beginning. An open air contained thriller. ?With a thicking clock (the tide). You have the initial situation, the next step is to find the end. Who is behind all this? Why? Is is a elaborate prank ? Is it a matter of revenge? I think you need falshbacks, like in the first SawRead more
Hello, this is a great?beginning. An open air contained thriller. ?With a thicking clock (the tide). You have the initial situation, the next step is to find the end. Who is behind all this? Why? Is is a elaborate prank ? Is it a matter of revenge? I think you need falshbacks, like in the first Saw movie.
See lessI think the best method to build a story around this idea is to make one small creative decision at a time and continue until you have all the main elements. If you’re not satisfied start again, change something, start again, and again. It needs time. Think about what you like, what you know – are you an expert in videogames? sports? Have you been betrayed? ever think ?about a painful revenge?
After escaping prison, a neglected step son witness a murder that becomes a subject of a documentary.
Hello, I don't understand where the story is... maybe you can rewrite the logline with some detail about the actual plot.
Hello,
See lessI don’t understand where the story is… maybe you can rewrite the logline with some detail about the actual plot.