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  1. Posted: March 18, 2016In: Fantasy

    When a body washes up on the beach, an anthropologist finds her life on the line to keep a secret that history has long forgotten.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2016 at 8:01 pm

    Hello, this is more a tag line?than an actual logline. A logline doesn't tease.

    Hello, this is more a tag line?than an actual logline. A logline doesn’t tease.

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  2. Posted: March 18, 2016In: Drama

    In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.

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    Me too I miss a hint about the reaction to the bulling. And I miss some irony - think about good will hunting: an violent orphan / a math genius. ?And I'm not sure how to place the reveal of his mother profession: wouldn't it be the real inciting event? If not, what happens in the movie between theRead more

    Me too I miss a hint about the reaction to the bulling. And I miss some irony – think about good will hunting: an violent orphan / a math genius. ?And I’m not sure how to place the reveal of his mother profession: wouldn’t it be the real inciting event? If not, what happens in the movie between the joining the team and the reveal… they happily play basketball:)? One other possibility would be to attach his mother profession to the character description and let this ‘flow’ be the base for the whole movie – this is the most (melo)dramatic device, a secret that is always about to be discoverd.

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  3. Posted: March 17, 2016In: Thriller

    ions.

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    Hello, I like this version less than the previous versions - there are the same issues and a few more confusing elements 'thanksgiving dinner with events at the dinner', 'to remedy illogical and family crises in respective locations'.

    Hello,
    I like this version less than the previous versions – there are the same issues and a few more confusing elements ‘thanksgiving dinner with events at the dinner’, ‘to remedy illogical and family crises in respective locations’.

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