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When a dying widower is approached by death with an offer, he must choose between donning the cowl, watching over his daughter or reconnecting with his love in the afterlife.
Always a bad thing to build a logline on a choice...... (in my opinion).
Always a bad thing to build a logline on a choice…… (in my opinion).
See lessWhen a narcissistic property developer is convicted for murdering a government official, he must untangle the web of deceit, to prove his innocence
The original version is better, but the issues are there. The word count means that you must choose the most valueable words, give the best details, the most useful details to give a picture of the whole story.
The original version is better, but the issues are there.
See lessThe word count means that you must choose the most valueable words, give the best details, the most useful details to give a picture of the whole story.
A down and out door-to-door salesman who wears a fake cast to gain sympathy and win a sale, knocks on the wrong door and is taken hostage by a woman’s deranged boyfriend. He must find untapped courage to save himself and the woman before times runs out.
Let me say, you re good! I like this one too. A contained thriller kind of hard to write but with an original concept. Glengarry glengross meets funny games. I like the main character because he has a flow to overcome and the situation is perfectly suited to let him change or die! Ithink you have soRead more
Let me say, you re good! I like this one too. A contained thriller kind of hard to write but with an original concept. Glengarry glengross meets funny games. I like the main character because he has a flow to overcome and the situation is perfectly suited to let him change or die!
See lessIthink you have some more work to polish the logline, be sure to erase sentences like ‘knocks on the wrong door’ , this doesn t belong to a logline where every word counts. A logline doesn t tease.