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  1. Posted: March 12, 2016In: Drama

    Sex, drugs, and violence are controlled in the casino club the the CROWD CONTROL team. Fighting with the crowds is the best part of their job. But can they control themselves?

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2016 at 8:53 pm

    I feel like this is more a tagline than a logline. Usually you don t ask questions in alogline, questions are tagline tools. I d like to have more informations about the main character this goal the source of conflict, the plot.

    I feel like this is more a tagline than a logline. Usually you don t ask questions in alogline, questions are tagline tools. I d like to have more informations about the main character this goal the source of conflict, the plot.

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  2. Posted: March 12, 2016In: Crime

    SMITHEREENS II – Sue finally understands her mother’s suicide after her crime cleaning business changes everything.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2016 at 8:48 pm

    Maybe it s just me but i feel like 5his lacks the basic requirements to be called a logline. Some more work is needed, checking a couple of logline tutorials would help.

    Maybe it s just me but i feel like 5his lacks the basic requirements to be called a logline. Some more work is needed, checking a couple of logline tutorials would help.

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  3. Posted: March 12, 2016In: Public

    EBABE finds success selling on Eworld Auctions, but now her life’s become a strange “eVenture.”

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2016 at 8:44 pm

    Hello, I m sure you have a great story in your mind and I like the idea of a movie about eauctions, but this is not a logline in my opinion. Try to check the training section on this very website or any logline tutorial on the web

    Hello, I m sure you have a great story in your mind and I like the idea of a movie about eauctions, but this is not a logline in my opinion. Try to check the training section on this very website or any logline tutorial on the web

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