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In 2100 Hollywood, a detective falsely accused of murder must clear her name by tracking down the real suspect: a famous actress cloned from her younger self’s DNA. ORPHAN BLACK meets MINORITY REPORT.
Hello, what I personally appreciate the most in a logline is when allits parts are well linked. In this logline I don 't get the link between the false accuse and the cloned actress.
Hello, what I personally appreciate the most in a logline is when allits parts are well linked. In this logline I don ‘t get the link between the false accuse and the cloned actress.
See lessIn an alternate Arabian fantasy world, when an ex-patriot assassin is forced by a corrupt Sheikh to kill a rival, he must choose between losing his fiance’s life, or killing an innocent man.
Hello, I think that building a logline ?on a choice is never a good choice. A choice is matter of one scene.or it could be the theme of the movie. Logline should dewcribe the plot, the action, the externzl conflict. I suggest also to make clear how the fantasy world influence the story or it looks jRead more
Hello, I think that building a logline ?on a choice is never a good choice. A choice is matter of one scene.or it could be the theme of the movie. Logline should dewcribe the plot, the action, the externzl conflict. I suggest also to make clear how the fantasy world influence the story or it looks just decoration..
See less‘ when his sheik ask him to kill an innocent man, a patriot assassin …. what HAPPENS? what does he must do? What actions dous he must perform
A small town detective is forced into an inconceivable mystery when a severed hand, genetically identical to his, appears next to the headless body of a boy. When the case leads back to his own missing son, he?s introduced to a world of parallel universes in which he may be able to save his family and the world.
Hello, this logline promise a lot, but in too many words in my opinion. No need to say "inconceivable mystery" because you say what the mystery is (a severd hand genetically identical to the detective's?hand) and let the reader decide if it's unconceivable or not (and it is!). "he's introduced to aRead more
Hello,
this logline promise a lot, but in too many words in my opinion.
No need to say “inconceivable mystery” because you say what the mystery is (a severd hand genetically identical to the detective’s?hand) and let the reader decide if it’s unconceivable or not (and it is!).
“he’s introduced to a world…” this is not clear to me, what do you mean exactly by ‘he’s introduced’?
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