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A grieving, self-righteous Vigilante must confront a fatal error before burying his hatchet in the killer of his son…
Thanks. However, the protag's a gangster who turned vigilante when his son was killed so he's been hunting his son's killer for the last 5 years. It's the new recruit, the son of one of his victims, who gives him new info which finally leads him to his son's killer. But the new recruit only decidesRead more
Thanks. However, the protag’s a gangster who turned vigilante when his son was killed so he’s been hunting his son’s killer for the last 5 years. It’s the new recruit, the son of one of his victims, who gives him new info which finally leads him to his son’s killer. But the new recruit only decides to give him the info when the gangster-vigilante shows remorse for killing his dad…
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However, I like this one - "A grieving, self-righteous, revenge-obsessed Vigilante must confront a fatal error if he?s to bury his hatchet in the killer of his son?" I think it shows the hero's goal (revenge), his inner need (to 'bury the hatchet'), his fatal flaw (self-righteousness) and the probleRead more
However, I like this one –
“A grieving, self-righteous, revenge-obsessed Vigilante must confront a fatal error if he?s to bury his hatchet in the killer of his son?”
I think it shows the hero’s goal (revenge), his inner need (to ‘bury the hatchet’), his fatal flaw (self-righteousness) and the problem he faces in achieving his goal (a fatal error).
I also like the way it plays on the metaphor ‘bury the hatchet’ which points to both his murder method and what he has to do metaphorically to move forward in his life.
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This is probably cleaner: When he takes on a new recruit a revenge-obsessed vigilante learns that a man he'd killed 5 years ago was an undercover agent close to rescuing his then missing son. When he learns his actions contributed to his son?s death he breaks down in remorse which leads the new recrRead more
This is probably cleaner:
When he takes on a new recruit a revenge-obsessed vigilante learns that a man he’d killed 5 years ago was an undercover agent close to rescuing his then missing son. When he learns his actions contributed to his son?s death he breaks down in remorse which leads the new recruit to show the Vigilante his dad?s secret files ? including the true identity of his son’s killer ? so he can finally execute his revenge.
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