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  1. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

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    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 2:06 pm

    I like 'jaded' but yeh, he's still motivated. He loves killing these perverts. Plus, he's making a fortune from it (paid for by the outside force, the child trafficking ringleader who killed his son is using him as an unwitting debt collector). The money the hero receives he feeds through his wife'sRead more

    I like ‘jaded’ but yeh, he’s still motivated. He loves killing these perverts.

    Plus, he’s making a fortune from it (paid for by the outside force, the child trafficking ringleader who killed his son is using him as an unwitting debt collector).

    The money the hero receives he feeds through his wife’s charity, which is how she deals with her grief/anger.

    So the hero’s wife and daughter are opponents too.

    The kid who infiltrates the gang falls in love with the daughter and actually becomes a fake-opponent ally, joining forces with the hero in the end to take down the outside force –

    – the child trafficking ring-leader responsible for killing the hero’s kid and setting the hero up to kill the protege’s undercover agent dad.

    So yeh, his wife and daughter are opponents.

    The main antagonist is largely outside of the hero’s world until the climax, although we see glimpses of his operation at work….

    the main story is the relationship between the hero and the kid who infiltrates his gang who he grooms for leadership, to the dismay of his daughter…

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

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    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 1:57 pm

    You've hit it right on the f**king head again. Bang on.

    You’ve hit it right on the f**king head again. Bang on.

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A nurse helps two vampires rob a mobile blood bank.

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    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 1:46 pm

    Obviously a comedy as it's making me smile...! Makes me wonder what they're going to do with it...?

    Obviously a comedy as it’s making me smile…! Makes me wonder what they’re going to do with it…?

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