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  1. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Filmstar Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 1:43 pm

    I still like the 'grooming a protege for command' tho....how about: The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motive...

    I still like the ‘grooming a protege for command’ tho….how about:

    The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motive…

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

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    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 1:33 pm

    Like it man! Also, this doesn't give away the fact the 'new member' has a plot to kill the Hero ... which is a reveal... AWESOME. :D

    Like it man! Also, this doesn’t give away the fact the ‘new member’ has a plot to kill the Hero … which is a reveal… AWESOME. 😀

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Filmstar Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 1:28 pm

    So, how about? The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command plans to kill him in vengeance for his murdered father.

    So, how about?

    The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command plans to kill him in vengeance for his murdered father.

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