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A remorseless investment banker is fired and, in a twist of fate, taken in by the family whose Indian restaurant business he helped bankrupt in a recession. Forced to work as a bus boy to make ends meet, he learns the errors of his ways.
Not bad, just a little cheesy in an old-fashioned way. Old-fashioned as in "Sullivan's Travels" or "It's a Wonderful Life." You can definitely tighten it more by using the formula: "When hired by an unsuspecting Indian restaurateur whose previous business he destroyed, a ruthless but fired investmenRead more
Not bad, just a little cheesy in an old-fashioned way. Old-fashioned as in “Sullivan’s Travels” or “It’s a Wonderful Life.”
You can definitely tighten it more by using the formula:
“When hired by an unsuspecting Indian restaurateur whose previous business he destroyed, a ruthless but fired investment banker must …”
Learning the errors of his ways is the inner journey. What is thenouter motivation that drives his actions?
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I agree with the previous comments. It sounds like they're kind of story, where there is a second story and within the first one, and the main character is the listener of the second story. Then, we get into a cut between the two stories, where there is a second character, the protagonist of the secRead more
I agree with the previous comments.
It sounds like they’re kind of story, where there is a second story and within the first one, and the main character is the listener of the second story. Then, we get into a cut between the two stories, where there is a second character, the protagonist of the second story, etc. etc.
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"When she hides a fugitive claiming to be from the future, a little girl must help him turn her school's see-saw into a time machine and escape mobster justice." We need some idea of what the girl has to do in order to save him. She can hide him in the basement, but then what? Whether he promises toRead more
“When she hides a fugitive claiming to be from the future, a little girl must help him turn her school’s see-saw into a time machine and escape mobster justice.”
We need some idea of what the girl has to do in order to save him. She can hide him in the basement, but then what?
Whether he promises to marry her future self or something else maybe redundant for the logline. It’s their B-story.
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