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  1. Posted: August 21, 2019In: SciFi

    In the future where people can change gender in an instant thanks to a revolutionary new pill, a young woman uses this method to evade capture by the authorities in pursuit of the real person who murdered her daughter.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on August 22, 2019 at 3:19 pm

    One would assume that in a world where gender changes can happen in an instant, a fugitive's changing gender would not be enough to fool the authorities. The police would have caught up with the technology needed to identify DNA in an instant. It's an interesting idea, this pill, but I'm wondering iRead more

    One would assume that in a world where gender changes can happen in an instant, a fugitive’s changing gender would not be enough to fool the authorities. The police would have caught up with the technology needed to identify DNA in an instant.

    It’s an interesting idea, this pill, but I’m wondering if a crime story does it justice and helps it pay off to the outmost?compared for example to a rom com (bisexual woman wants to win the heart of both a straight and a gay man). Or a scifi political allegory about transgender rights.

    But a crime film?

    OK, so she changes gender once. Pursue, pursue, pursue. It’s Harrison Ford all over again. What’s new?

    Or does she swap between genders lots of times? Perhaps between A- and B-story scenes? She turns back to a woman so her hospitalised father recognise her? Just like Spiderman takes off the mask before aunt Mae? And how many times can we see this magic before it becomes banal?

    Also, in such a story, transgenderism will play a serious part. Politically. people go through lots of work, hormones etc., to achieve a gender change, today. What do you think changing gender in an instant means for them and for society?

    First of all, it means that society has accepted transgenderism to such a degree that whole sectors of scientific research have been dedicated to people who want to change gender. It means that society is much more liberal than Trump’s America, for example. (And this is definitely an understatement.)

    It also means that there will be a great wave of experimentation with this pill. Men will switch to women for one night, just to feel multiple orgasms, then switch back to their male selves in order to be powerful at their work place the next morning.

    Unless patriarchy has been crushed?

    (I’m scratching my head but?patriarchy taken away?I can’t find any reason for any woman to change into a man?for purposes of experimentation I mean.)

    See what I mean? We are talking about huge social differences that go with the pill. Have you considered any of them?

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  2. Posted: August 21, 2019In: Crime

    When a wonder drug makes sleep obsolete, a morally conflicted TV hypnotist decides to help police investigations in a new world where criminals exploit a more fragile and easily manipulated human mind. (1 Hour Crime/SciFi TV Show)

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on August 22, 2019 at 7:00 am

    In a world where a drug has eliminated sleep, when uncontrollable daydreams push people to murder, a delusional private investigator teams up with a washed-up TV hypnotist to solve a murder case.But what is there to actually solve? Someone got the drug and killed someone while in a semi-awake state.Read more

    In a world where a drug has eliminated sleep, when uncontrollable daydreams push people to murder, a delusional private investigator teams up with a washed-up TV hypnotist to solve a murder case.

    But what is there to actually solve? Someone got the drug and killed someone while in a semi-awake state.

    There is something disempowering about having common knowledge that people who operate under the drug’s influence (while day-dreaming) get to kill others. If the drug’s side-effects are known, there is not much for the private eye to discover. Then, I would think that more attention would be put to blaming the drug than blaming the half-unconscious perpetrators. Thus, you don’t really have a crime film, but a sci-fi court drama, where a lawyer tries to win a case against the drug company.

    Just a note: the private eye probably does not use the drug. Still, he may suffer from delusions.

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  3. Posted: August 20, 2019In: Comedy

    A renowned? but snobby food critic finds himself trapped in a Michelin star restaurant after a snowstorm with the volatile French chef whose previous establishment closed down due to a scathing review he wrote.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on August 22, 2019 at 6:05 am

    Instead of a snowstorm (which is unintentional) I would think that the chef intentionally trapped the critic. I agree with Mike. We don't even know what the chef wants to do. Revenge is the first that comes to mind, but not necessarily. Even if we go with revenge, we still don't know What kind of reRead more

    Instead of a snowstorm (which is unintentional) I would think that the chef intentionally trapped the critic.

    I agree with Mike. We don’t even know what the chef wants to do. Revenge is the first that comes to mind, but not necessarily.

    Even if we go with revenge, we still don’t know What kind of revenge the chef plans to do. Extort him? Just kill him? Kill him, cook him, and serve him to the next critic? Cook his foot and serve it to him?

    As you see, each different kind of revenge reveals both a different kind of character and of story genre.

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