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When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked. Her powers are challenged by an enemy Kung Fu clan who seek to destroy her and the school. (Revised edition).
The "When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked" bit feels either like a backstory or irrelevant, unless you suggest that the clan is associated with her assault.
The “When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked” bit feels either like a backstory or irrelevant, unless you suggest that the clan is associated with her assault.
See lessMY THIRD TRY: To stop a likely nuclear war among earthlings, a space alien whose race wants future control of an un-radiated planet, demands that all nukes be disassemble now or else NO electricity for a decade.
If the alien is the protagonist (which is a little awkward, given that you could have a planet-full of human characters), what must she/he do during the movie? Makes demands, then what? What happens in your script?
If the alien is the protagonist (which is a little awkward, given that you could have a planet-full of human characters), what must she/he do during the movie? Makes demands, then what? What happens in your script?
See lessA college student wakes up in a world where the laws of nature can be rewritten and must find a way to escape before he is trapped indefinitely.
Richiev has a very good point. Moreover, you don't specify in which manner the laws of nature can be rewritten. We need to know this?it is what makes your alternate universe unique. Lastly, if laws of nature can be rewritten, can't he hack the exam and pass without taking it?
Richiev has a very good point.
Moreover, you don’t specify in which manner the laws of nature can be rewritten. We need to know this?it is what makes your alternate universe unique.
Lastly, if laws of nature can be rewritten, can’t he hack the exam and pass without taking it?
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