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A corporate executive is forced to choose between taking his dream job overseas with his new girlfriend or staying to try and repair his relationship with his estranged brooding teenage daughter when she announce she’s pregnant.
This is much better. I just think that changing the word order will make it much clearer "When his estranged teenage daughter announces she's pregnant, a coorporate executive must choose between strenthening his relationship with his new girlfriend or trying to mend his old reltionship with his daugRead more
This is much better. I just think that changing the word order will make it much clearer
“When his estranged teenage daughter announces she’s pregnant, a coorporate executive must choose between strenthening his relationship with his new girlfriend or trying to mend his old reltionship with his daughter”
See less14 months after a virus wipes out the human race, a lone survivor fights to stay alive on the empty streets of London, battling her own mind as she looks back at the life she lost.
This is an interesting idea, but the logline is a little vague in its protagonist. The first line is great. It sets up the inciting incident perfectly. You just need to give the main character a goal.She needs to be going after/searching for something or someone as well as looking back on the past.Read more
This is an interesting idea, but the logline is a little vague in its protagonist.
The first line is great. It sets up the inciting incident perfectly.
You just need to give the main character a goal.She needs to be going after/searching for something or someone as well as looking back on the past.
Even the movie “The Road,” which is pretty random in its lack of story, still has them heading to the ocean. That’s their goal
e.g “14 months after a virus wipes out the human race, a lone survivor searches the empty street of London others while battling her own mind and a past that haunts her”
See lessWhen a rival Japanese ojek (motorcycle) company comes to Jakarta and steals their workforce, a reckless wannabe streetracer must prevent his business from closing.
Great update, sounds awesome
Great update, sounds awesome
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