1. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Hi dpg, Because it was posted the judges, and I think that what they expect of us is a constructive and formal critic.

    Hi dpg,

    Because it was posted the judges, and I think that what they expect of us is a constructive and formal critic.

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Please excuse the confusion between "wonder" and "wander". And FEEL GUILTY but DON'T WORRY: It was just a joke ;-) NB: In french "Jean" and all the compoud forms are man's first firstnames (Jean = John). So i'm not a women's lib militant but a 58 years old man. ;-)

    Please excuse the confusion between “wonder” and “wander”.

    And FEEL GUILTY but DON’T WORRY: It was just a joke 😉

    NB: In french “Jean” and all the compoud forms are man’s first firstnames (Jean = John).
    So i’m not a women’s lib militant but a 58 years old man. 😉

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Ok guys, And what about we need to rewrite it now?

    Ok guys,

    And what about we need to rewrite it now?

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