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(Comedy) What if an old woman found a spaceship in her backyard and the government wants it, but she wants to keep it to help her alien friend!
Hi Helise, I think you have a good logline, a nice pitch, and matter to make a great funny story : A single-handely mischievous and bright grandma can defeat an entire foolish administration without any problem!
Hi Helise,
I think you have a good logline, a nice pitch, and matter to make a great funny story :
See lessA single-handely mischievous and bright grandma can defeat an entire foolish administration without any problem!
(Comedy) What if an old woman found a spaceship in her backyard and the government wants it, but she wants to keep it to help her alien friend!
Hi dpg, Nice pitch!
Hi dpg,
Nice pitch!
See lessWhen a terminally ill dancer becomes part of a radical treatment group, she uncovers the deadly secrets of a renegade oncologist and must battle to save more lives than her own.
Hi sarapensalfini, Seems to be good. I see a Hero, her flaw, her quest, her antagonist, the conflict, what's at stakes... the whole story in 31 words. I don't see what could improve your logline except something that increase empathy for your hero (maybe replace "dancer" by "young mother", or somethRead more
Hi sarapensalfini,
Seems to be good.
I see a Hero, her flaw, her quest, her antagonist, the conflict, what’s at stakes… the whole story in 31 words.
I don’t see what could improve your logline except something that increase empathy for your hero (maybe replace “dancer” by “young mother”, or something like that…).
I saw two good movies close to the genre : “Coma” and “Extreme mesures”. In these two movies, the hero was a doctor. I think that the fact the hero is a patient is a bonus because it increases the stakes and it makes the quest harder.
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