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  1. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 3, 2013 at 7:57 pm

    Strange writing. The beginning sounds like a deep drama and the end like a silly comedy

    Strange writing.
    The beginning sounds like a deep drama and the end like a silly comedy

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    Desperate to hang on to his pregnant girlfriend, bumbling Dennis gets caught up in a kidnapping scheme gone awry, leaving him saddled with a sociopathic little girl who seemingly calls the shots.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 3, 2013 at 7:42 pm

    I find this confuse. I don't see what links these three parts

    I find this confuse.
    I don’t see what links these three parts

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 3, 2013 at 5:18 pm

    And something for your logline (31words) "Clashing husband-and-wife scientists need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury their new invention that could save millions of lives"

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    “Clashing husband-and-wife scientists need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury their new invention that could save millions of lives”

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