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  1. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    A forensic photographer on stress leave takes the pilgrimage home, only to become embroiled in a cold case from her youth. What she discovers is her worst nightmare. What she finds is redemption.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 5:53 am

    Hi Sarapensalfini, Hi kbfilmworks, My feeling is a little different (if I don't mistake due to my broken english): I see a characterized hero (I assume her perception of forensic environment will influence her behavior) I see a flaw: her stress leave I see a quest: reconnect with her past, I see a hRead more

    Hi Sarapensalfini,
    Hi kbfilmworks,

    My feeling is a little different (if I don’t mistake due to my broken english):

    I see a characterized hero (I assume her perception of forensic environment will influence her behavior)
    I see a flaw: her stress leave
    I see a quest: reconnect with her past,
    I see a hardship that suggest antagonism and conflict : an eembroiled cold case
    I see what’s at stake: overcome her worst nightmare

    And the resolution could be told like: what she will plead for (or seek) is redemption.

    “A forensic photographer on stress leave takes the pilgrimage home, only to become embroiled in a cold case from her youth. What she discovers is her worst nightmare. What she will plead for is redemption”
    (35words)

    I see a good story behind this.

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 3:20 am

    I wonder why this post is more successful than the next up. Is it because "Virginity loss" and "dreamgirl" are most appealling than "pregnant girlfriend" and "sociopathic little girl"? May I reveal that the second is the sequel of the first?

    I wonder why this post is more successful than the next up.

    Is it because “Virginity loss” and “dreamgirl” are most appealling than “pregnant girlfriend” and “sociopathic little girl”?

    May I reveal that the second is the sequel of the first?

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  3. Posted: May 30, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) What if an old woman found a spaceship in her backyard and the government wants it, but she wants to keep it to help her alien friend!

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 2:49 am

    Thinking to E.T. and 1941, I'm sure that's an idea Steven Spielberg would love!

    Thinking to E.T. and 1941, I’m sure that’s an idea Steven Spielberg would love!

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