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  1. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 2:39 am

    Hi kbfilmworks, Hi dpg, I agree with dpg. 1. "rules" are guidelines wich allow us to progress on a safe way, but great things are made over the lines. I.E. "The Birds": - no hero - no flaw - no stake - no conflict - no antogonist - no story ... ... and a great movie! In France, we say "pass? les borRead more

    Hi kbfilmworks,
    Hi dpg,

    I agree with dpg.

    1. “rules” are guidelines wich allow us to progress on a safe way, but great things are made over the lines.

    I.E. “The Birds”:
    – no hero
    – no flaw
    – no stake
    – no conflict
    – no antogonist
    – no story …
    … and a great movie!

    In France, we say “pass? les bornes, y’a plus de limites”. It means literally “once the lines are crossed, there is no more limits”; wich is a pleonasm, but it means that liberty is beyond the lines

    2. “it helps to understand the rule we?re deliberately going to break”, because
    – it may allow us to understand the underlaying primary rules (I.E. “need to settle their differences in time to fight”)
    – it may allow us to ‘sense’ what we’ll find beyond

    If it is the case, it’s an amazing advanture. And it is the basis of the Hero Journey!

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    ?Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ?Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years.?

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 1:54 am

    >> It is a good logline to make a good compelling story You can find details about this story on my previous post: "Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors of the forties must struggle to foil the Villains who want to make them spread an elusive virus which threaten the worldwide networks. "Read more

    >> It is a good logline to make a good compelling story

    You can find details about this story on my previous post:

    “Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors of the forties must struggle to foil the Villains who want to make them spread an elusive virus which threaten the worldwide networks. ” (May 30)

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    ?Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ?Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years.?

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 5, 2013 at 1:48 am

    Hi pastorim, Thank you. I grade it I found 'despite himself' on http://www.wordreference.com/fren/malgr%C3%A9 I mean 'against their will' or 'in spite of themselves'

    Hi pastorim,

    Thank you.

    I grade it

    I found ‘despite himself’ on http://www.wordreference.com/fren/malgr%C3%A9

    I mean ‘against their will’ or ‘in spite of themselves’

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