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Within the depths of Hell, a man sees his daughter brutally murdered and her child snatched by a satanic cult who will sacrifice her in two days.?Escaping into our world he shoots a bloody path to save his grandchild.
This one works for me. Great stakes, clear goal and deadline. Only, "within the depths of Hell" confuses me. What does it mean? The story is not set in Hell, or is it? "Escaping into our world": where in the story does this happen? It almost sounds like the climax.
This one works for me. Great stakes, clear goal and deadline.
Only, “within the depths of Hell” confuses me. What does it mean? The story is not set in Hell, or is it?
“Escaping into our world”: where in the story does this happen? It almost sounds like the climax.
See lessA lovable T-Rex has fun at the two legged Theropod Club with his friends, making his winged Pterosaur sister feel out of place at the meetings until she joyfully joins in.
I don't know this series. If you expect that not a lot of people have seen it, I wouldn't label it a 'Classic'. This section is really for movies people have seen, so they can read the logline for reference when they build their own. While it's here, I might as well have a look at it. :) What is theRead more
I don’t know this series. If you expect that not a lot of people have seen it, I wouldn’t label it a ‘Classic’. This section is really for movies people have seen, so they can read the logline for reference when they build their own.
While it’s here, I might as well have a look at it. 🙂
What is the main goal here? Does the T-Rex want his sister to join the Club? But what are ‘the meeting’s? Why is it important that she should join? Is she isolating?
A character having fun doesn’t really promise me any interesting drama. Is this really what is going on?
It reminds me of the dreadfully boring first act of Wolf Creek, where the characters were also ‘having fun’ for about 30mins.
See lessYears after his son's murder an obsessed vigilante trains a new recruit to continue his work but discovers the kid he's chosen is an AWOL commando on a revenge mission to take him down…
"Years after his son's murder": the reader may ask "what took him so long?" I can see that he has been a vigilante ever since and only now things go wrong. The story is really about a vigilante finding out he is training his worst enemy. It sounds like TRAINING DAY in reverse, from the POV of the trRead more
“Years after his son’s murder”: the reader may ask “what took him so long?”
I can see that he has been a vigilante ever since and only now things go wrong.
The story is really about a vigilante finding out he is training his worst enemy. It sounds like TRAINING DAY in reverse, from the POV of the trainER, not the trainEE.
This logline effectively only gives us an inciting incident: the hero REALISES he’s training his worst enemy.
Now what?
The obvious answer is: he’s going to try to stay alive and eliminate the commando. But that’s pretty vague. How? What makes this story interesting?
We need to have an idea of what is going to happen in the movie, particularly Act Two.
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