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A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
That's way too much thematic baggage. My idea of movies is memorable images and emotions. I do love abstraction in movies but movies written around the desire to elucidate a theme? Sorry but I'm a storyteller not an intellectual. That aside, many thanks, I'm now really happy with the logline.
That’s way too much thematic baggage. My idea of movies is memorable images and emotions. I do love abstraction in movies but movies written around the desire to elucidate a theme? Sorry but I’m a storyteller not an intellectual. That aside, many thanks, I’m now really happy with the logline.
See lessA bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
That's way too much thematic baggage. My idea of movies is memorable images and emotions. I do love abstraction in movies but movies written around the desire to elucidate a theme? Sorry but I'm a storyteller not an intellectual. That aside, many thanks, I'm now really happy with the logline.
That’s way too much thematic baggage. My idea of movies is memorable images and emotions. I do love abstraction in movies but movies written around the desire to elucidate a theme? Sorry but I’m a storyteller not an intellectual. That aside, many thanks, I’m now really happy with the logline.
See lessA bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
dpg, I'm not sure I follow your train of thought. I've just tried to do what CraigD suggested and brought the victim into the logline as 'something to care about'. Maybe it wasn't clear in previous iterations that the prime universe double is just an innocent average Joe - what you describe as the sRead more
dpg, I’m not sure I follow your train of thought. I’ve just tried to do what CraigD suggested and brought the victim into the logline as ‘something to care about’. Maybe it wasn’t clear in previous iterations that the prime universe double is just an innocent average Joe – what you describe as the stakes character.
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